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New Satanist
I'm a new satanist
evil as can be
so hail to the earth
and hail to me.
I don't worship Satan
so get your facts right
I worship nothing but me
and am wiccan by night.
Some day the spells I cast
will finally work and it will be glorious
having a voodoo doll of you
right in my hand.
You will have no peace or grand ol' days
when I pin you with needles and make
you my slave.
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Seren
Thu, 2023-02-16 00:29
Dear Heather
I promise not to mess with you. Just jokes.
This is darkly good well done!!
The last two lines are the pin. It smacks the reader in the face.
Kind regards Seren/Jayne
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats