Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

I'm Famous

You make me famous
you might not know it but it's true.
You always talk about the shit
that I've put us through.

When you speak about m even
in horrible ways, it gives me the power
to stick with you till you finally
fade away.

You've turned so dark and cold
so far I made you this way from all
the stories you've told.

I'm so famous deep in your eyes.
You say you'll stop thinking about me
which you won't even try.

So tell me I'm famous for you know it's true.
Tell me I'm famous I want to hear the
words come from you.

I'll be forever famous when I'm old and gray.
I'll be ever famous till your hatred is gone
away.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Explicit Content
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.