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My Mother's Stroke (a limerick for the Serious Limerick workshop)

In these bodies we really are, "stuck".,

it's difficult getting through all the muck !

Mom just died from a stroke,

and was comfortably broke;

so it seems death's a stroke of "good luck"!

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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This is my submission to the "serious limmerick" workshop. Thanx for your considerations, and condolences in advance. She was my Mother, best-friend, taxi, confidant , and muse....so, she will sorely, be missed...as well as continually loved! Sincerely, Doc Maverick.
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Our thoughts are with you,
another wave in the eternal perfection,
as we take our stations in that other world of Spirit.
My thoughts to you all there,
Yours Ian

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

To you doc.
I'm sorry to hear that you've lost such a good friend as your mom.
Your words are very expressive.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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