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Money… splurges and sex

if one has money
it’s best to splurge it
why keep it locked up
for others to feed
enjoy your life your way my son, life has many joys to present…. some love sex and luxurious beds …. pillows higher than high …and women to beneath lay … so we have many who like playboys play … others just would love to flaunt their wealth…. to show how big is theirs !!!...pockets you know… but tis better to spend, than hoard
for many will of course call you Lord …as they all know ….guys and gals you can only anyone of them afford …. what life you can lead one may say…. any to economy it will add up all the way
be it condoms or metal pistols… flashing dildoes …women love so much…
have money …
spend will you
then the entire world will be
far below
only you shall be
all above!

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Free verse
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I think you have a weird talent...if it was shaped a little to flow better, could be vastly improved.

Dry humour too ' show how big is theirs!...pockets you know'...


you are abs right
your maiden visit and comment
make me happy
no two poems of mine are alike
this was on some ones poetry
i shall reshape it
if you guide
and so wish


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