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moms love

I think i shall also abandon poetry
and
write plain and simple prose
so many poems
on mothers did I compose
many were better than prose
as sentiments for mothers... we... can only convey
once in a life's unique way

as nothing on earth can replace a mother
why...
because only she does lifelong bother
to be with us all our lives

mothers love comes before wives
even after she has left

Oh my gosh
what a surprise

so for a mother's love
praise
in a standing ovation all rise...

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Who doesn't? Just curious. My brothers had mixed love hate. Standing ovation for all mothers. lovely

thanks in capitals

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I'm working on a mother poem at the moment. Being one, I want unconditional love/ having had one, I'm not so sure.

Jenifer

All the supposed wrong they did fades into the background and only the good is remembered

I'd love to have
All the best

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If you are young enough and I am old enough for you to be my natural born child xxx

as you mayn't know
the number of dawns
I have scored ,

maybe it could be the other way around ..
anyway ...
its kind of you
to have respected mothers true .

I am an actor of poetry
I get into the garb
of anyone who so desires
to extract ...
an emotion ...
no motion

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What an amazing way to describe age! The number of dawns I have scored. Scribbler, mother love is despite knowing your child is a mass murderer!

her child is juvenile
at all ages
so pardon him ...

thanks for counting the dawns
why scribble???

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I reckon mothers love us because they are blind to our faults lol. A nice tribute to those who are blinded by love..............stan

My greatest joy in life is being a mum .... I know my kids have faults but I find it hard to see them Lol
I really liked this

Well done

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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