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many don't last

most don't last in the walk of time
be it anything
poetry or rhyme

most don't care
beyond a single tissue
most take it fast ere it becomes an issue

Only those who endeavour most do last
never be too quick to end up fast…

take your time
prepare the audience of your kind
be it sexy poetry
or just a party

never be hasty
last as long as you can do
life's sojourn is far better
than reaching the destination
I wish you knew..

now go warmed you are
in the tunnel of time
and last a while
till you read mine...

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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\Love this poem
the rhymne and lesson imparted in it.
forgive my spelling
its just laziness but Im working on it slowly

I like how your creativity speaks Loved..what makes
a poets work stand out...

Thank You!

as long as you walk aside me
and create a poet out of me
ere from this mundane world I retreat

when we meet
twill be a treat
some where in Ontario
i shall let ye know..

loved

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Yes I agree with your view of the sojourn

Yes I agree with your view of the sojourn

you would sojourn
to arrive

loved

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I would have liked the rhyme to go all the way through the poem it felt like the cadance was lost a little

it is worth working on loved I will keep my eye on the edits of this one it shows much potential

love and hugs JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

shall await more views
ere i confuse

loved

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