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A Lovely Piece

A Lovely Piece

Others will read
This lovely piece
Only if you read theirs
It’s like give and take
And
Then we rake
Make, so many friends
And
Compose some poems,
We love,
Others to the garbage bins,
We dispose.
Love is all in the air,
Don’t blankly stare,
For other poets do care.
To appreciate a brethren
In this world today
Tis rare
So love do share,
And
Now go
Take some fresh air.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

within myself
which makes the spirits of others
reach out to me
thanks Shirley

loved

author comment

I hardly read others just to have them read my stuff, but expect others may do so with me. very thought provoking work here............scribbler

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