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Latitude.........

supine suppositions
descend
tender snowflakes
meaningful beauty in the cold

the day rolls slow
the pain
the ache
hurting like a wind

easing through the
wounds

A sun struggles to warm
the ice upon my heart
but its locked
and the key is somewhere
in the dark

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in the darkness alone
one can express warmth
of heart mind and soul
beautiful words
who will relieve your pain
I don't know
but the warmth of your heart
is warmer than a hearth....

take care the pain shall subside
along a rivers bank
go take a ride
the pain shall ebb away
as does a low tide...

loved

That you conveyed in true Eskeresque fashion

I have missed reading you this really has something it makes my heart clench

wonderful poem as per the norm :)

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

But Esker you nail it here! I identify with the emotions and images you evoke.

Why latitude as a title? And is this a personal poem?

Awesome work.

No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot

http://www.wsgeorge.com/

a wavelength suppressed
It goes sideways into the psyche
no relief for the wicked

want to puke or cry
on these scripts

bad bad bad

gonna have to ride it out
just woke up from nightmares
the back ache so bad
from riding hard on the mountian
bike...Used to have a soft tail
spring acticulated frame

see why

gotta go back to sleep
pain so bad
Old lady gave me an Imovane
the nightmares so bad on that

Im laughing so bad...
fuck

sharing all this with you
Not all poets go through this
but I do.........

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I pray all goes well with you, Esker. :-)

No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot

http://www.wsgeorge.com/

sunshine...good friday
taking time with dogs today
its going good

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