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Latitude.........
supine suppositions
descend
tender snowflakes
meaningful beauty in the cold
the day rolls slow
the pain
the ache
hurting like a wind
easing through the
wounds
A sun struggles to warm
the ice upon my heart
but its locked
and the key is somewhere
in the dark
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Comments
loved
Wed, 2013-03-27 11:46
beautiful words
in the darkness alone
one can express warmth
of heart mind and soul
beautiful words
who will relieve your pain
I don't know
but the warmth of your heart
is warmer than a hearth....
take care the pain shall subside
along a rivers bank
go take a ride
the pain shall ebb away
as does a low tide...
loved
Frenchf
Wed, 2013-03-27 15:30
I liked the images
That you conveyed in true Eskeresque fashion
Seren
Thu, 2013-03-28 05:59
Sigh Steven
I have missed reading you this really has something it makes my heart clench
wonderful poem as per the norm :)
love JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
William Saint George
Fri, 2013-03-29 04:35
rich and dark
But Esker you nail it here! I identify with the emotions and images you evoke.
Why latitude as a title? And is this a personal poem?
Awesome work.
No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot
http://www.wsgeorge.com/
Esker
Fri, 2013-03-29 05:15
depression....ache and dreams...
a wavelength suppressed
It goes sideways into the psyche
no relief for the wicked
want to puke or cry
on these scripts
bad bad bad
gonna have to ride it out
just woke up from nightmares
the back ache so bad
from riding hard on the mountian
bike...Used to have a soft tail
spring acticulated frame
see why
gotta go back to sleep
pain so bad
Old lady gave me an Imovane
the nightmares so bad on that
Im laughing so bad...
fuck
sharing all this with you
Not all poets go through this
but I do.........
William Saint George
Fri, 2013-03-29 08:50
I pray all goes well with you
I pray all goes well with you, Esker. :-)
No verse is free for the man who wants to do a good job. - TS Eliot
http://www.wsgeorge.com/
Esker
Fri, 2013-03-29 10:44
Morning..got the shakes coming down off this
sunshine...good friday
taking time with dogs today
its going good