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jussa a moment pleeze!

jussa a moment pleeze!

moment and time
are the same things..
what you want to say
as Shakespeare did,
time and tide wait for no man...

everything in life is opportunity,
if a gal swipes her lips
she wants a kiss,
which if not taken you miss..?

if she wants you to say
I love you
and you don't hear
it’s up to you,
you lost her my dear...

Gone with the wind
I shall be
catch me if you will,
till and still by your own free will
else heaven alone knows
where time goes
as you stand in the ether
invisible, nude stark and still...

Style / type: 
Free verse
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A picture of being there doing nothing and the end product of the action.
A good theme maybe over flowery but a good write.
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

for quite some time
thanks Ian
for giving it an injection to life


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