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I Walk In Spirit and Truth, Not Dark and False

There's a principle in the Bible
That says
Do unto those who CAN'T do unto you
In equal
Feed the poor
Provide for the widows
Look after orphans

There's a principle in the world
That says
Do unto those who CAN do unto you
In equal
Feed the poor
Provide for the widows
Look after orphans

In my experience
I've been and still am poor
Unable to eat from tables
Designed to
Feed the poor
Provide for the widows
Look after orphans past and present

Feeling alone, unloved frequently,
I fret not over my plot
Unable to handle trials aright
Why?
God equally, spiritually
Feeds the poor
Provide for the widows
Look after orphans through his word the Bible

Therefore, I walk in the light of spirit and truth
Freeness
Not in shadows of darkness, falseness
Bondage
To every wills of another trying to make my life morose
Attempts to control my world with worldly principles
To do unto those who CAN do unto them in equal

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Comments

wow. very lovely and true. i love the honesty. the title was very fitting.
-starlight

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