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human trees

Did you ever realize
trees have a life
no soul
human beings
as much as trees produce seeds
and as they seed fresher ones
we to newer generations

after the weeds in the sea
we were like fixated trees
quite some billions of years thence
we did to travel commence
on all fours
do you know or want to know more
we all were trees once before.

Have you ever seen a vineyard leaf
it has veins like a palm human
that’s how god created an ovum and sperm
to fix the length
of all at every corner of the body
fingers first of all
so we learnt through ages passed
we all were trees first at last
DNA now for all

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God created Love,stood back and laughed.
As he had already created confusion.
A good write there Loved,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

LORD GOD spared me
from the confusion malady
thanks to Ian thee


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