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of human creativity

thou makest me feel

indispensable
maybe ,indisposable
may, what else
ingarbageable

but I'm glad many Neopoets follow you
and
the stamp of

free verse
which
is no curse

let it rest about my shoulders,
we are all trained to carry heavy boulders,

the Taj Mahal wouldn't have ever been built
unless guys like you and I
weren’t made to
under the over weights
be killed

but for a monument of that stature,
I shall once again lay
and
with the might of creative human player
happiness display,

albeit,

it may be some other day

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

long time no read I see your still writing your comments into poetry
nicely done as usual ;)

~JC

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

not much knowledge about poetry composing ,
so i use my minds
jugglery
glad you like it

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is masturbation.
This poem is nonsense.

cheers,
Jess
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missed ur lovely wonderful and sexy comment
that's what makes it more soulful

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but please never use caps, it demeans your poetry, your words should be enough.

Sorry for being so mean

cheers,
Jess
Everything changes bar one. Neopoet's 'Prime Directive'-
"Critique don't comment".
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

which alone I like .Caps was for another site
I have removed

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