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Her First Smile ::: of 1942
Her First Smile ::: of 1942
Memories of mamas
Never fade away
Till we similarly
Pass the same way
My mom smiles at me
Since her very last day
I still keep returning her way
When will time
take my smile away?
Come back mama
For once
And
as we smile
Take me smilingly
your smiles way
miles away,
miles away
yes ,
miles away
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Ian.T
Sat, 2012-02-04 12:59
Loved
I loved this write and especially the year as it was a perfect year when all the best people were born, which has nothing to do with me being born in that year, I was so surprised it took me a couple of years before I talked about it. That your Mother smiles over all those years is wonderful, Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sat, 2012-02-04 19:33
This poem
was composed ,some months ago
Surprisingly it remained unread
as a blog...It surfaced of its own on Neopoet's screen
Hence.
Furthermore the poem has nothing to do with my mom
.It was inspired by someones work over here .
Glad you liked it any way.
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author commentIan.T
Sun, 2012-02-05 02:48
Loved
It was still a vintage year LOL, have a lovely life out there and worry not it vexes the spirit, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2012-02-05 04:51
Sure
but when Can I wish you
a happy birthday?
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author commentIan.T
Sun, 2012-02-05 16:21
Loved
You could have wished me Happy birthday on 26/3/42
I had just arrived and was a little bemused by all the fuss you now are 70 years late lol, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Sun, 2012-02-05 22:51
Your date of birth is intriguing
if you can also tell me
your time of birth
I could perhaps
hold you amazed ,
with the knowledge i have gained
over the years ,
learning all about
the Human Mind.
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author commentIan.T
Mon, 2012-02-06 06:29
Loved
9-30 am GMT , that is GMT not the summer time as that came in on the Sunday after the first Saturday in April that year and was double Summer time for that part of the war, Take care out there and this has that little bit of useful info you always like lol, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..