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Harmattan Poems I-V
I
Everything is in
a state of gradual decline:
our conversations
taper off the anticline
and dwindle into silence.
II
With time the music
will get on your bloody nerves:
your lips will bleed and
kisses taste like rusted nails;
speech will be spare and thirsty
III
We've spent our old days
swiping through false memories
by frigid windows
wet with tears, or sometimes rain;
should we go outside to dry?
IV
A chorus of dead
leaves rises with each footfall;
haze disperses in
all directions, as if from
some lone dementor fleeing
V
Sand between my toes;
Coconuts like shriveled tits
Clap against the breeze.
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A series of poems written about the Harmattan season.
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wesley snow
Fri, 2015-12-04 15:59
It's quite beautiful.
It is filled with so many metaphors that you could call it that. The language use is spectacular.
W. H. Snow
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