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Happiness well, well

it takes a life time to know
to learn all about happiness
also
how to remain so

most of us run
from pillar to post
to find out what happiness means
no one searches one’s inners
to realize that’s where happiness lies,
in between mind and me

my desires and wants
my lust and sex...
all we need to do
is just to be happy
that’s what I mean to be,
do you really know
what happiness means
to ye….

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Free verse
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Comments

cryptic, this one.
A lot of people today, are so out of touch with who they are
that they don't recognize themselves when they are mirrored in another's eyes.
Obviously, you know who you are. I like this one. ~ Gee

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This is a find poem - from a deep thinker.

I like this stanza:

to find out what happiness means
no one searches one’s inners
to realize that’s where happiness lies,
in between mind and me ( I Like this line )

I like that you ask the question in the last stanza, it makes me and others think! and reflect.

Very well done.

Love Mand xxxx

and thanks for saying its fine ...

and u lie that one line

regards as usual you do justice to my poetry

thank u again for the very well part
and now poetically answer
the questioned part

loved

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