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A Happier 2013 for Neopoets

We are always here
for each other
whom we love
like does no other

then one day we are gone forever
we still hope no one will forget us ever

as stars we are framed in heaven too
how love abounds for all of you

as Loved wishes
a Happy New Year
individually
to each friend like you …

even when its winter in the North
far up north is clad in snow
true well wishers follow us
forever
where ever
we may go…

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That you have wished us so much is enough,
we will read of your ways in the next year
with thoughts of good cheer.
Smile our young Bard
there are friends here,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

there are friends here,...
well said ur ...
.ONE BIG ONE

loved

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it is bloody hot down here, but the same feeling for fellow poets extends.

Remember, those I criticise most are the ones I feel have most potential. The others I ignore or purposely try to piss off. Sometimes you fall in the latter category, but you always come back with gems of poetry and human compassion.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

Remember, those I criticise most
are the ones I feel
have most potential........hahahahahahaha .

The others I ignore or purposely
try to piss off......
MOSTLY....... you fall in the latter category,

but you always come back
with geRms of poetry
and human compassion.

Why in the hell do I salute you Jess???

for a hard task master can only bring out the diamonds from rocks unsold
and mould wires/CHAINS of gold
from down trodden laden rocks
damned biting COLD...

loved

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We have Jess with us and no matter what he says we usually learn from him.
Hopefully we are at the end of a bad time and starting out into a good time, we will still be chastised and most times for a good reason.
I came to Neopoet to just put out some writing, and meet like people,
The journey is never smooth I am glad to say, it would teach us nothing if the path was smooth, how boring we would become.
We would end up writing trash and singing its praises, this is why we are here.
Good teachers are hard to find especially in this field, I am needing a challenge in writing, not in correct form but a write that has many talking.
Have you any Ideas ????
The Mayan calendar has been reset now and we are now in the first era of the first stages, I wonder what it will bring to the Humons.
Take care young Bard, I will go to search out words that I can stretch across the universe, Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

you and Jess are like two boxers in a ring

the referee says
'''well done GREEN (IAN)

RED (JESS)
THE WINNER...

I must admit
without the support of both
red and green
Loved would have been nothing in between
alas a salmon fish maybe
rotten to be far flung
across the red sea
to be forgotten
but twere not to be
Jess and Ian
are my poetic
Blue Green or Read
Gods for me

loved

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As ships passing on the Oceans of life so are we.
I bet you cannot know the hobbies I have.
This is one to find in the hay without an eye..
I will give you a clue in "P" sharp that would look well.
Milliners will use them up, as would a flower to wear in lapels.
Then to send a greeting across the sea one would stick for you to see.
La La Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ONLY ONE
I'm aware of.....

haahahha
oooooooo
lalalallaaaaaa

no existence withOUT it ...this
P

loved

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the answer is "IN " the clues La La, maybe you will have to invade my face book page to see some of my work LOL, Take care have a great day, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

ian fb?? name

loved

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