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The Halloween Bug (November Contest)

Sometimes the wind blow
as troubles flow
The stress of everyday
lingers where my head lay

Outside on my patio
Underneath the big oak
I watch rays of the sunshine
sipping on black stellar wine

Butterflies flutter
Birds sing songs never stutter
the sound of a green and orange caterpillar
dropped from big oak, not too far

A halloween bug
With a black body
Has a orange smiley face
On it back looking at me

I be at one with nature, a libra
Enjoying the winged creatures
and the crawly creatures
Forgetting every trouble the winds blew my way

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Comments

well i love this, your accent is really strong, its really endearing, i can hear your voice, I hear you girlfriend. Libra's love and appreciate the beauty of things. love your ending seems that i was there watching. nice to see you. A lovely entry for the comp, by the way i didnt know about the haloween bug so today i have learn't something new. x

Thank you...Teddy

I called it Halloween Bug because of the way it looks and I saw it in October ... this the first time I ever seen a black bug with an orange smiley face on its back..... its on my youtube channel you can see it for your self ... https://youtu.be/W-gVZ3E6kgE

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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