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this guy challenged me

you ask me!
you ask me just now
and shall write one for you,
as only love does ensue
from the crevices of my heart instantly
and
you can fathom the depth incessantly
at your own free will,
but all love you still,
for the love you give
and
hope you will continue
to read me still,
of course at your own free will.
I’m a naturally born poet,
and know no poetic nuances,
my words flow
out of sheer spontaneity
and
lovers like you
love to swallow
that’s all I know
about poetry
the balance my computer does play
to finally display

sorry for this short delay
as I had to post two more
poems for today…

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Free verse
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I would challenge you
I’m a naturally born poet, [you might have the impulse, but that's all]
and know no poetic nuances, [and that is why, you are too fucking lazy to learn to write poetry]

cheers,
Jess
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soon
i will write a fuckin cheerful one too
watch out friend jess
will you

this was year 2010

loved

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