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GRATITUIDE

GRATITUDE -update

Thank you for caring for me
with deep love and affection.
Thank you for all the ways
you soothed my days,
Thank you for being my eyes,
my legs ,my hands,
Thank you for understanding
when I cried.
Thank you for crying with me,
And if there is a world beyond
look for me when you too are gone.
I will be waiting...

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Comments

piece of gratitude.
Thank you for sharing those noble feelings Joe.

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Call our names and we will be there, as there is no time in that beaut place all time is now.
I shall not race you on this one, lol
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I am fighting to stay on this earth, but when the "race'' is done. I will looko for my dear friends.

joe

author comment

perhaps as it seems

we shall have to go ahead of thee
to welcome yee into the folds of eternity
where you will not be found wanting

the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and Geremia I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth are more heavenly

you may not be as happy
when in the arms of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you do know it

so stay as long as you can recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!

With remarkable blessings such as these I am encouraged.

joe

author comment

is genuine
keep it in mind
to help all in distress
such as your kind

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