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GRATITUIDE
GRATITUDE -update
Thank you for caring for me
with deep love and affection.
Thank you for all the ways
you soothed my days,
Thank you for being my eyes,
my legs ,my hands,
Thank you for understanding
when I cried.
Thank you for crying with me,
And if there is a world beyond
look for me when you too are gone.
I will be waiting...
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Rula
Sun, 2014-08-10 15:29
An expressive
piece of gratitude.
Thank you for sharing those noble feelings Joe.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Ian.T
Sun, 2014-08-10 18:04
Joe
Call our names and we will be there, as there is no time in that beaut place all time is now.
I shall not race you on this one, lol
Yours Ian.T
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
Geremia
Mon, 2014-08-11 12:00
I am fighting to stay on this
I am fighting to stay on this earth, but when the "race'' is done. I will looko for my dear friends.
joe
author commentlovedly
Mon, 2014-08-11 00:29
perhaps as it seems
perhaps as it seems
we shall have to go ahead of thee
to welcome yee into the folds of eternity
where you will not be found wanting
the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and Geremia I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth are more heavenly
you may not be as happy
when in the arms of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you do know it
so stay as long as you can recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!
Geremia
Mon, 2014-08-11 11:58
With remarkable blessings
With remarkable blessings such as these I am encouraged.
joe
author commentlovedly
Mon, 2014-08-11 23:28
my task assigned
is genuine
keep it in mind
to help all in distress
such as your kind