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Frosting with time

Frost
was a wonder poet

Frost
now frosted by time
as we all some day
will and shall and must and ought to be
as time spares none
neither you nor me //I

so as our time goes by
let us our minds
in the wilderness freely fly
seek the unknown
and mark in stone
someday we shall also be known
as engraved pieces of clay
with homes unknown
let us frost
ere snow arrives
who knows what may later arise
and we will be lost in oblivion
and
with no surprise
nor a prize

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Comments

much as I agree with this poem, you may have just offended your greatest supporter, Stan.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

he is a lovely neo
excellent poetry

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author comment

HELLO STAN My
our only man
who reads me whenever he can
hasn't since long time I ran

loved

author comment

Love the title! I looked up the author and enjoyed reading his poems! He left something special behind! as have you!

Love Mand xxxx

and
thanks for saying
what have u

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Stan will love this as it will bring a few more people to read the works of Frost and there are many that have never heard of him, Yenti being one lol,
Yours Ian.T

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