Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Frosting with time

was a wonder poet

now frosted by time
as we all some day
will and shall and must and ought to be
as time spares none
neither you nor me //I

so as our time goes by
let us our minds
in the wilderness freely fly
seek the unknown
and mark in stone
someday we shall also be known
as engraved pieces of clay
with homes unknown
let us frost
ere snow arrives
who knows what may later arise
and we will be lost in oblivion
with no surprise
nor a prize

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 


much as I agree with this poem, you may have just offended your greatest supporter, Stan.

Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

he is a lovely neo
excellent poetry


author comment

our only man
who reads me whenever he can
hasn't since long time I ran


author comment

Love the title! I looked up the author and enjoyed reading his poems! He left something special behind! as have you!

Love Mand xxxx

thanks for saying
what have u


author comment

Stan will love this as it will bring a few more people to read the works of Frost and there are many that have never heard of him, Yenti being one lol,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

(c) No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.