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Found Out

I found out where I’m from
due to a response I made, the other day,
and you could see my past, bubble out of my eyes.

It even temporarily blinded my vision
until I finally realized,
that I was brought up to respond in that manner,

and I was led down a path to where I’m currently at,
and gone were my inhibitions, in the night
for it felt like springtime in my heart.

I had finally found out about myself
and about who I am, thanks to you,
and how you make me want to be a better man;

and I found out some other things, too;
for instance, how much I need your light rain to wash over me
because of how pure you make me feel.

You have made my life so passionate, and focused
that I found out you are the magic in my rainbow,
and your heartbeat is the sound of my thunder;

which I found out, is necessary for me to remain calm,
because the melody of your song carries me to your arms,
and allows me to lose myself inside your storm;

where I remain dry, and warm, and very grateful
that our voices can share the harmonies of your song,
allowing me to find out, that I like the me I am…..when I’m with you !

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Exploring the fact that some people bring out the best in you
Others the worst

...I thank, you. I was exploring reeverse, which I struggle with.
sincerely, thanx;
doc.

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A wonderful poem Doc ... Exploring or not I like where your headed

I can't add anything nice to read you again

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

...once again it appears we are the only ones "up"! I'm off for eye surgery, so you've laid my focus on the day.
Thanx, once again.....for that.
Sincerely.
doc.

Neopoet is "newtriffic" !
...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
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