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Oh, your love has untethered, unbound me
Heart beats an intimate dance, called romance
Your gnawing need for me, and mine for thee
consumes, alternate reality, a trance
I'm floating on cloud nine, sweet ecstasy
Ah, can this last eternally? perchance
Reflected gaze I feel like a beauty
My feelings broad as the oceans expanse
Your my soulmate, my best friend, my happy
No formula, not an exact science
except one on one, may add upto three
I appreciate our dalliance
Flirting is the fuel that keeps love red hot
tempted by another forget-us-not

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Structured: Western
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very emotive. Were it me I'd break it into stanzas but that's just me. And the varied rhyme pattern does not detract.............stan

thanks scribbler just trying different forms my attempt at a sonnet lol glad u enjoyed cheers sueb x

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