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FeteKarnalashun

chokecherry smudge
the club mists
sticky trysts

black soled grey leather pumps
bracelets that glitter
like the snow
loud patrons
and cabbies
tracking black
ruts in the down
drifting
from Forever winter

Music and meter glow
Drive on driver
beneath the hallowed
show
dark eyes
dark nite
the fuel
may help us
sleep tonight
beneath the
burden of eternity
toiling in the turmoil
sleep rumpled
slumped

no nightmares
please
no vivid
escape
A ghost of a television
a bathroom
of hot steam
a window to let
out bad air
and keep winter
in ourhair..

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learn from him Once Neos best poets

Go deep and dig
undiscovered poems

you will learn

I remember you and your mystical writings! it took me several times of reading and each time I found something new in your poems. Where have you been? I have missed you and your wisdom!

*hugs & love, Cat

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he is now beyond beyond
I only am going to spend time
unearthing unread poems
as my memory and regards to poets
who once were
Neos

I am so sorry for the loss of him...go in peace dearest Stephen.

what a great thing you are doing, lovedly...

* love and best wishes, Cat & eddy styx

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Esker as we all knew him
was like MOUNT EVEREST

in his comparison
we are like dwarfs

Still he loved me
raised my morale and oceanic heart that he had

he placed me on his fans list
both as loved then later lovedly

I Bow to him
where ever beyond beyond he may be
none can say anything of
eternity or infinity
at least not I

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