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Driver in the dawn 'audio'

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QeHI0NFVpVjA2dnc/edit?usp=doc...

The brightness
Of of car lights
Are as blinders
Covering my eyes

My lens out of focus
Obscured in the dawn
Descending on me
Before rising of the morning sun

The popping in my neck
Dull pain in my back
Weakness in my knees
Tingling in my legs and feet, seized me

My spirit reveals
Endurance at its best
A strained drive home
The morning light has arrived

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