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Do Soul Mates Really Exist

Soul mates exist
between two people
committed to each other

Not looking at greener pastures
something fresh
but freshen up one you vowed

Through rough and tough
happy and joyous
and going is to a scrawl

You're about to throw in the towel
call it quits but then you don't
you stick it out with your soul mate

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Yes soulmates exist. It can be defined as a person you love so much to go through the hard work of marriage or numerous other ways. But to me, foremost,
I couldn't imagine being without her for a second. If I wake up in the night and she's not there, I have that microsecond of panic wondering where she is.
You could call it codependency, or dependence, etc. but soul-mate fits the lock far better for me. Good poem Barbara.

Ron

BlueDemon77

Blue Demon77

"What I want is to be what I was before the knife,
before the brooch pin, before the salve, fixed me in this parenthesis:
Horses fluent in the wind. A place, a time gone out of mind."

The Eye Mote-Sylvia Plath

I glad you like it. I saw a similar poem title and had to create this title and write the poem. thanks for sharing your cherish love moment it is beautiful to love and be loved that'll way.

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