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Blue swell
I know you too well
wet me
these clouds sharp
torn at their peak
these winds stride
perilous tear break
the weight my heart
makes
light shivers
where you stand
a memory
delivered
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Candlewitch
Mon, 2012-06-18 12:06
Dear Steven,
This reminds me of the waves of emotions felt when someone leaves us all alone. Even if they are still in the room...
these winds stride
perilous tear break
the weight my heart
makes
light shivers
where you stand
a memory
delivered
incredible piece!
always, Cat
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Esker
Mon, 2012-06-18 19:24
The bans of light
rays falling
cascade of dark fear and might
and the sharp edge of
knowing
It is about someone
or someplace
Blue swell is the feeling
of course not quite set
depression thick
but creative life
alive
with depth
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