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For sure, I’m a creative egoistic poet

I have composed over 8000 poems, yes, 8000... during the past two plus years... as I was confined in the snows, not to be forgotten... As you know no two poems of mine... fall in a slab...albeit they might seemingly give off similar perfume .If a poet is understood, then one is no poet at all.
For creativity is not at its verges end
It’s not a cliff
but an echo on a cliff
which sounds
resounds
and
rebounds
but never fades into the realms
of frameless eternity...

We do not yet know
whether eternity has a limit,
if it were so then we will cease to believe
in the existence
of that super power
we call Time
as it would have been caged
This is to my creative imagination
beyond an iota of sense.

Creativity has no limits thus ...

2.Come as you may

With a ton of bricks and anger
I shall not display
Because you mean well
and
my actions though blunt,
foretell
that mayhem in hell
shall not withhold
all that I have to convey
to the masses across the Internet astray,
But you are welcome
to my domain any day,
I solemnly and sincerely
Yes lovingly do pray

3.
CHARISMA

in the East they say

''KARISHMA....’’...MAGIC

ASK A CERTAIN POET HERE,
YES, KAILASHNA
to confirm

But I call it the nuance of
TIME
unforgotten
and
the scourges unlimited
undefined
not for you or none
but for all and any
YET, EVERYONE

4.Thank You Poet

You are a great poet of today
I am only trying to cocoon out slowly
in my own inimitable way
hope someday
I may be able to pass your way
but time for that is not ripe yet today
You summon an artist in me
it's a signal praise
I hope to live up to your
high levels as you say levels as you say

The poet She is ...OMMM!!!!

I never see u call by now a days
fed up may be
of my silly comments
perhaps
but I still love to read thee
and see parting lips in imagination
as i scan your poetry
ma'am you are a wonderful poet
indeed..

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in modern warfare around 50,000 bullets are shot per kill, whereas snipers have a kill rate of about 1.4 bullets per kill.

As poets should we not strive to be snipers with words?

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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In war
none is ever killed by a bullet
as all fire in the darkness
only shells wound.....
snipers are not worth their salt
if they don't kill
one for one,
may be injure another
with the same single bullet
Richochette...
I am thus.....
each poem of mine
must touch the heart
in such a manner
that tears must flow
else my poetry ought to blow

loved

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