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CHOICE

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CHOICE

 

At this psychological moment,

Curiously cut off from the gyrating frenzy around me,

When all that remains

Is a tantalising  memory

Of the cool roundness

Of an upper arm

Closely held on a darkened floor

In some distant time past-

Dark eyes under weighted lids,

And a half-smile on an upturned face…

I catch myself wondering:

Just suppose…

Given the choice again…

Would I…?

 

And then the girl across the table

Leans over, bemused,

Waves five fingers under my nose,

And says: “ Dance?”

…And the spell is broken…

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Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Your take of ths is spot on: it was indeed a past memory ( not the local talent being oggled!!) that got me drifting away from the moment, in the disco.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Psyve

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A moment caught
in the film of the inner eye
revised, reflected onto your sight
right now intense and real again,
it tells of such tiny things that stay in our memory
to come back and show themselves,
we wonder why,
the time, the place, such commonplace things
can hold on fast and become epitomes of actual experienced happenings,
the stuff that poetry brings.

Love Ann of Norway

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

Indeed, you are right.
One does wonder why such small commonplace things stay with us in our memory.
I suppose it is part of what makes us individual human beings.

Thank you for stopping by to read this one...

Psyve

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Thank you for taking the time to read this and coment.

Am glad you liked the imagery of that moment.

Psyve

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