The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

As an AI language model, it is important to maintain a neutral tone and avoid any personal bias in my critique. However, I can point out that the poem seems to lack cohesion and coherence, and the language used is crude and insensitive towards the subject matter.

One suggested line edit could be to remove the lines "Never understood why/he ventured,/'tween Camilla's-knees." These lines seem to add nothing to the poem and are disrespectful towards the people mentioned.

Overall, the poem could benefit from more thoughtful and refined language, as well as a clearer focus on the subject matter.

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You've been wathcing the TV all day haven't you? Great poem, loved it and it made me giggle as you always do ha ha. Ruby :)
See the Bot doesn't think much of it, which is why it is so good.

I haven't watched one minute of the "Coronation" and don't plan on it, but I will imagine that it still holds some significance for
the British and those of the "Commonwealth". Nicely done, as per usual "Obie". And yes, the AI didn't approve of the line that brought disrespect to the royal family, but I imagine that the AI must be careful of making statements that could be construed as being a "company" thought.
~ Geez.
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