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Can't

I'm not able, I won't, I can't
this is the weak person's chant
makes me want to rant
try to stay calm but I can't

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Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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this poem is almost as lame as my last one.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

thanks Jess who's Tony Robbins

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I despised the concept for a long time but his ideas are pretty cool
Anthony Robbins downloadable.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Managing Directors, with Richard (themoonman)

But I agree with Jess.this is well below your normal level of skill xx

no problem french f thanks for reading and commenting all the best sueb x

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