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Can't

Submitted by sueb on Wed, 2013-01-02 04:53

I'm not able, I won't, I can't
this is the weak person's chant
makes me want to rant
try to stay calm but I can't

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Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Editing - rough draft

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weirdelf

Wed, 2013-01-02 06:41

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this poem is almost as lame as my last one.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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sueb

Wed, 2013-01-02 07:30

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thanks Jess who's Tony Robbins

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weirdelf

Wed, 2013-01-02 08:25

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I despised the concept for a long time but his ideas are pretty cool
Anthony Robbins downloadable.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Frenchf

Wed, 2013-01-02 20:18

But I agree with Jess.this is well below your normal level of skill xx

sueb

Thu, 2013-01-03 04:54

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no problem french f thanks for reading and commenting all the best sueb x

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