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C H A R I T I E

an open wound
alive with warmth
steams

rising
as the soft
new snows
gather

past an
alarm of light
blazing in
its lonely
place

wet
with leaves
disguised
with night

a cold fire
with a scald
alive
within a heart

laying layers
beneath
fluidity

each slow world
dissolving
soft texture
of sound

delicate
impressions

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Comments

not breaking any new ground, but who says we have to?
Want to hear how it sounds to me?
http://vocaroo.com/delete/s0WOLzb3ksiq/dd1b64553810ff9e

cheers,
Jess
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