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C H A R I T I E
an open wound
alive with warmth
steams
rising
as the soft
new snows
gather
past an
alarm of light
blazing in
its lonely
place
wet
with leaves
disguised
with night
a cold fire
with a scald
alive
within a heart
laying layers
beneath
fluidity
each slow world
dissolving
soft texture
of sound
delicate
impressions
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2013-11-08 10:59
What can I say? Classic Esker
not breaking any new ground, but who says we have to?
Want to hear how it sounds to me?
http://vocaroo.com/delete/s0WOLzb3ksiq/dd1b64553810ff9e
cheers,
Jess
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