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Bursts of Imagination

Bursts of Imagination

It is only rarely
That my imagination bursts out
In a way volcanoes do
The ocean gives just some comfort
To the tsunamis
That may surface
My mind is a jug full of juicy joy
A sort of commotion
As someone before did ask
Why don't you leave something?
To imagination
I took the cue
Metaflorically I flew
From the wilds of my inner imagination,
Into the far folds of seeding eternity
As my mind of its own does fathom,
Albeit mysteriously
Unbeknown to me

That my thoughts flow
In such a manner
Even I don’t know
How they themselves
Emerge at random,
Do you know or say
The how?
Is it for me?
I compose all poetry
Thoughtlessly
And
Extemporarily
As this one now you can see

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Your style is very, you
to think a while is not your cue
and one cant judge one bit
when every slugs a home run hit
and any bitten thumb to jive your tread
bleeds for nothing when your ten steps ahead

cheers,
logic

Raffy

break the ice
tis nice
now we shall read each other
and i'm sure you'd.................

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to what you read with diligence

it oft improves
my sense
of times evaluation

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If I do write some more
of these kinds
of poems
do keep in mind
that some day
you may
exhaust all your superlatives

but do not hesitate
to ask me for some more.
oblige you
I will for sure

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To write what one knows personally is usually powerful, as here displayed. Only suggestion: In the way volcanoes do....................scribbler

Should I burst like a volcano
there will be a great loss
to all countrymen
the air traffic
shall cease once more,

r u quite sure
that twill
the Airlines endure.there will be a great loss
to all countrymen
the air traffic
shall cease once more,

r u quite sure
that twill
the Airlines endure.

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imagine the imagination... !

niiice!

~

it calls the scores
and poets like you too
explore

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NO MORE scope
now to burst
had i read you first
twould have been worst
but the burst wouldn't have been
better than the latest
queer volcano's
in comparison
earthly thirst
now in
LOL,..... LOL
you may burst

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