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bolt from the blue

boltish bluish
what do you say
of bolts

where from heaven
they like missiles are fired
where on earth is it not a blue circle
the sea
the horizon
distant ocean
the Nile
the nails
all indicate the bluishness of creation
soft serene calm
also inter woven with a tinge

when we say why are you so blue..
more when I'm out of my blues
I shall compose then of varying hues
so far you reside in a circle of your own creation
searching from red and green
yellow too
anything which has a tinge
of you know now what..
abstract blown blue

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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ensconced on my favourites list.
What have you done, where have you been,
your poetry splatters the screen!

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

so many indirect messages sent
your poetry and works hit
hard hard hard
bang bang bang
and so very hard
at times i wonder
how they must be taking itt
hahaahah

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The blues!
Charlie Parker, Mingus too,
You missed my favourite jazzy blue,
But what about the other blue?
Omitted deliberately?
Movie blue
Now I am blue... boo hoo

Hmm I've recovered from work xxx
Great poem looking at the intricacies of expressive phrase

I loved it ;)

I would tidy it up though it looks a bit messy
and thats MY pet hate lol giggle

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

kindly help clear the mess Serendipity
will you>>>

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its not that bad really I was going to change the middle of the second stanza but then after some thought decided I should keep my hands off it lol

love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

mind for the better
hopefully tomorrow

than ks take your time i will appreciate it

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I will have another look tomorrow but I can't promise you I will change my mind

Goodnight Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

one is also blue
and some one said it was sad
so i didn't read it
others shall do one by one tooo

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