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Bedfellows

So that a mighty god from your bosom
Might be dislodged
You forget yourself
In the echoes
Through the walls at night
Houses breathe here
Like their inhabitants
Uneasy and for blissful seconds
Sometimes not at all
Did you hear me when I whispered
You wouldn't be looking for me
If you hadn't found me
a devil disheveled
a worm unearthed
At odds with
Everything he's not
This is what ache looks like
For a home you can never have
Like love you will know
Only by the hollow it leaves
This is how rivers work
For a man that makes lakes
In the mountains and
Tributaries in the swamp
Roads of gold or bone
We walk them both alone
Through the grief
Before the feast and
The ash we all make
Weapons ready and
Healed of indifference
Familiar bedfellows to the pain
We chose
When words meant something

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

I feel that I am woefully ill-equipped to understand how deep these pools of poetic feelings are. Your skills of enigmatic writing
intrigue me, and I am again, left wondering where I have been when so many of your works have been posted? I must have been dealing with a hospital-stay or something. At any rate, I am glad to have you back writing on our site. Nice stuff! ~ Geez.
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Hello, IO,
I agree that it is good to read your poetry again. I would never claim to understand the entire work completely, but so many feelings surface when reading: loneliness, discontentment, defiance - and, with that last line, a bit of remorse.

"Like love you will know
Only by the hollow it leaves."

Who among us has never felt that?

Thank you,
L

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