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In Another Life I Live Bravely

I want to live in the tallest apartment in New
York City, and peer my gaping eyes through
my window to see only dancing beetles below.

I will wear expensive feathers and furs, I’ll
dance with strangers, and I’ll party for a while
with headliners after sold-out shows.

I’ll walk the streets wearing only perfume and
watch men stand agape as I strut past, too awed
at my nakedness proud and aglow.

I’ll rebel and I’ll wail and I’ll cry out,
“Change will come! Justice will prevail!”
And I won’t shut up until Change comes and goes.

I’ll play poker with CEO’s, and kiss strange men in taxis,
and spin through the nights like a globe on its axis;
to live with honeyed hi’s! And never with lows.

I’ll do pilates and yoga, drink only red wine,
and I won’t dwell on the men who used to be mine.
I’ll live fast and so furiously young,
and I’ll die gentle, soft and divine.

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I love the whole poem, but, these lines stand out to me:

I’ll do pilates and yoga, drink only red wine,
and I won’t dwell on the men who used to be mine.
I’ll live fast and furiously young, and I’ll die gentle, soft and slow.

*hugs, Cat

p.s. you might try proof reading as some words are misspelled.

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hi cat!!
thank you for commenting!! im glad you enjoyed!
what words were mispelled? I read through a few times and couldn’t find anything.

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this line:

to live with honeyed (hi’s!) And never with lows.

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hi cat!
thanks for explaining!
that was meant to be a play on words with hi (the greeting) and high.
i appreciate your feedback!!

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thanks for the explanation, now I understand, lol, I get it. mush brain me. *love, Cat

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Hello, MM!
Interesting concept! I can feel your enthusiasm and zest! Brought a big smile to my face!
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Hi Lavender!!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It made my day :)

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Beautifully captures the feminine wilds and it’s liberation.

Hi Tawny!
Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it I’m so glad I was able to capture the wild feminine side.

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