The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Directions" effectively uses metaphor and imagery to convey a sense of longing for guidance and certainty in life. The vividness of the imagery, such as the "big yellow road sign" and "robed figures on my tarot cards", helps to engage the reader and make the poem's theme more relatable.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm and meter. The varying line lengths and rhythms can make the poem feel disjointed and can distract from the central message. Experimenting with a more consistent structure could help to enhance the flow of the poem and make it more engaging for the reader.

The poem also tends to tell rather than show. For example, "Biology is boring I want the real stuff" could be more effectively conveyed through a concrete image or metaphor that encapsulates the speaker's dissatisfaction with their current learning and their desire for more meaningful knowledge.

The use of questions throughout the poem effectively conveys the speaker's confusion and uncertainty. However, the poem could benefit from a stronger conclusion that either resolves some of these questions or leaves the reader with a powerful image or thought to ponder.

Finally, the poem could benefit from more varied and creative language. While the language used is clear and straightforward, experimenting with more poetic and unusual word choices could help to make the poem more memorable and impactful.

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Hello, MM,
I have a feeling all of the important questions and wonders will all be answered and fulfilled when we simply stop, sit down, study the stars and accept life for what it is - simple and with as little defined direction as possible. Much to contemplate here.
Thank you!
L

I have to agree with Lavender.... and am reassured of my early feelings and thoughts of you. You seek the answers to many mysteries in your life and I have no doubt you will find the answers. I envy the energy of your unbridled youth!

*hugs, Cat