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Angel Love

Felt down and out
crushed in spirit
alone in my soul

I felt unloved
unappreciated
in my spirit

then the angels came
surrounded me
angel speak

I fell asleep
like a baby
loved and appreciated

the dawn came
my heart wide open
waiting on the sky light

the moon sets
the sun rises
a new day, I rise up

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One more exquisite poem flowing out of your pen Barbara

Regards..

raj (sublime_ocean)

Appreciate that

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What a great piece you have here appeals to all senses really in depth thank you for much for posting this.

Mario Vitale

Glad you like it. I’m studying angel numbers and numerology. It’s so fascinating.

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Indeed, Faith is Confidence. Confidence that the Promises of God are true. Progression through life is peppered with many instances where we can place our confidence in ourselves, or confidence that God will fulfill His promises…exhibiting our Faith in God by recognizing He fulfills His promises through our Righteousness.

Mario Vitale

For visiting and commenting

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There are some thoughts and words which aren't shared by me. But if you wish you can explore some of these thoughts all you need is just to spend a little time with me.
As darkness can only be destroyed by darkness in the same way, the feeling of hate can only be destroyed from love. I believe that one should love to live and live to love, after all it is the only life we have got... I dedicate this poem to my parents as I love them alot
I wrote this poem because I believe that people who are in love should promise their self to each other,where as not to make promises,rather to be true to each other in a relationship,and to love one another to the end

This poem is about having to part ways with someone you love because you're on different paths. I dated a college athlete for two years and when their career took off in a big way, I realized that we wouldn't be able to make it work. He wanted to me leave college for him and travel with him but I have my own goals. I didn't want a long distance relationship to stress him and so I let him go. It's bittersweet to see someone you love do great things and not be there with them
For an example :
YOU ARE MY LOVE Ever since you came in my life I always wait for you. day and night I wish to be with you together in your arms ,under the gaze of full moon night You made me feel I am worth loving , beautiful. adorable You appeared as rainbow in my dark sky Now I declare to the world, I am in love You are the prince charming of my dream As you said i am your first and last love. Thank you my love for your unconditional love. Now I know love means caring and giving

Mario Vitale

I appreciate your commentary I be back with more response to you comments. My eyes tires really fast

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This is great stuff. I adore this poem. Has to be close to one of your best. Well done. I look forward to reading what else I've missed.

Love J x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Glad you liked it

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