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Almighty?

Need to acquire might
often prelude to a fight
not upholding Right

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

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not?

cheers,
Jess
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right as in good or correct, not right as in right-wing.
You understand my confusion.

cheers,
Jess
Everything changes except Neopoet's 'Prime Directive'-
"Critique don't comment".
https://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines

right as in Good

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