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Ain't all Sugar and Spice

Ain't all sugar and spice
Do your bidding
Who ya kidding?
this ain't no wallflower
relinquishing her power
this is a goddess of grace
letting you occupy her space
So better be nice
she ain't all sugar and spice
Think twice

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
just a wee fun one
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a fiesty one you are! I love it...just a hint of evil ;) LOL! You rock!

always, Cat

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Ah thanks so glad u loved you've now made mine I didn't know how my humour would be taken cheers Susan x

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And who the heck would really be interested in anybody who Was all sugar and spice ? lol.............stan

very true stan we all know too much sugar is bad 4 u cheers x

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