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2014
This is the year of the strong woman
As you are well deserved of such honor;
Your strength is mighty uncommon,
Motivating future generations asunder.
Your time is now…
This is the year of the beauty in you,
You have persevered all trying times;
You let no one discredit your value,
And nothing stultifies you and your shine.
The hour is yours…
2014, the year of Strong Women
Around the world, everyday, all day;
Congratulations to the women!
You deserve to have it your way.
This is the year of your utmost praise
For being such a blessing to us men;
Working or/and with children to raise,
Or studying hard, you are independent.
Your time has come…
This is the year and forever after,
We take time to observe your worth;
The sacrifice you make for rapture,
Amazing how you can give us birth.
The hour has arrive…
2014, the year of Strong Women
Around the world, everyday, all day;
Congratulations to the women!
You deserve to have it your way
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raj
Wed, 2014-01-29 11:08
Hi Lamar
A nice poem to bring 2014 year of women into limelight . It is amazing to realize that they do so much multi tasking..Being a rough draft, I am sure you will be working on it to make it flow smoother, I was wondering if it would be nice to add a line after the concluding stanza "This is your honor"...just a thought for you to evaluate...
regards.
raj (sublime_ocean)
Lamar Ingraham
Wed, 2014-01-29 12:47
Lamar Tries
Thank you for your commentary. I believe that women deserve more than women give them for. Indeed, if we would step up as men, then women would not have themselves there. However, It is my belief that women are beautiful with strength. Therefore, I honor that in our women.
V/R,
Official 1SP
author commentIan.T
Wed, 2014-01-29 18:46
Lamar
My new year resolution:-
Is to use the feminine side of my brain to its fullest.
To treat all females as equals in all things.
Not sure what you have been reading but put it down at once.
Never mention it again, as it confuses my brain cells.
I liked the thought for one split second.
Now I am going into my cave until 2015.
By that time that tart of a Prime minister, tweedle dum
and his deputy, tweedle dee may not be in power any more LOL
Good write keep them coming,
I shall be able to get broad band optical into the back of the cave,
so don't worry about me missing your next piece,
Yours with Good thoughts Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Lamar Ingraham
Thu, 2014-01-30 17:04
Lamar Delights
Mister Ian T., I appreciate the witty humor and the graceful words of encouragement. You are indeed a fellow of character. Thank you for being another endorser of 2014, the Year of the Strong Woman.
V/R,
Official 1SP
author commentIan.T
Thu, 2014-01-30 18:45
Lamar
The thumb print on the top of my head,
dictates which way I has to vote lol,
Take care out there,
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..