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Comfort in These Arms

All my life I have been seeking you
To walk with you in the ways of Christ;
After all the trials you have been through,
It is time you experience a life that is nice.

Comfort is near...

You have been done everything alone,
Or so you believed that you have done so,
But God was there to guide you home,
And made you a branch with leaves to grow.

Protection is here...

Just come to me and let me embrace you,
Because God knows I waited all day to;
Comfort you in these arms of mine,
Feel the image of God in me all the time.

Sweetheart, come here...

You have so put faith in Jesus the Lord,
Now, faith without works it become dead;
We must join together on one accord,
As I am the head of you and God is my head.

Tranquility is thine...

I will not persuade you do to any wrong,
Only provide you with what God provides me;
Everything I have was supposed to yours along,
So come just here and to confide me.

You made are mine...

Just come to me and let me embrace you,
Because God knows I waited all day to;
Comfort you in these arms of mine,
Feel the image of God in me all the time.

Sweetie, Come to me…

Let me hold you, sweet darling,
Embrace the way husband should;
Because we have the thriving garden,
And everything made there was good.

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Comments

I believe you would be doing some edits on this one to make it flow smoother...having said that...i must say that the "longing", "craving" and "call" are very nicely strewn in these verses...

raj (sublime_ocean)

I am editor-struck again... my equivalent for star struck for an editor. You are amazing with comments and critiques. I feel your critiques are works of art themselves. Wow. Thank you.

V/R,
Lamar of Liberty City

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