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Your Admiration

Your Admiration

Is only because
your brain is so wired,
Despite your ailment
You are bright
While others not ill,
Are so much without
Depth, love and insight

Coz our brains are integrated
And
Cast at birth
While in the womb
And
The mom knows not
what she is thinking,
Of the loveliest new arrival
or the tomb

And

Her thoughts get transplanted
In our infant,
yet to be born ,
developing mind
Where can then ,anyone these two
Identical kind of brains ever find.

You remind me of a lost brother
And
So I hope you are one

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

Your poem inspires me to deep thought. Well done!

Always, Car

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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I've missed you terribly! I enjoyed your thought-provoking poem so much. It's great!

Love-Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

who love loved
and my admiration now
is for you
both above

loved

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