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Savor the Moment

A moment united
An awesome distinct thought,
point of view, none imagined

an idea freshly decided
initiated from creative cruxes of poetic etches
should be mounted, the next time

unveiled nuggets, shimmer in the light of your eyes
and, enhance taste, savoring the moment

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
playing with rhymes and creating a new style or idea of writing
Editing stage: 

Comments

Is it the pain, the experience? Whatever, your poetry has achieved a whole new dimension,

I love it! and find it very hard to critique

Really, your poetry has changed a lot, for the better..

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

Your rhyming workshop along with what I learning and experiencing is really what happening. Glad you like it. It shows me I am really getting better at writing poetry. And critiquing others

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cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

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