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Haiku about Owls 5/7/5

Stalker in the night
Prowling from swaying treetops
Owl catches her prey

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Structured: Eastern
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Haiku is the only form I actually enjoy doing, and this one which strictly I think is a senryu as haiku does not deal with subjects only nature intended..either way it paints the picture.

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

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I agree it is a senyru
But I wrote it for another poetry site that suggested this title for poetry writing thanks again
I wanted to share it here also

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i am a haiku fan and i loved this one...

raj (sublime_ocean)

thanks I am glad you like

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Wow - one of my favourite forms on one of my favourite birds. A beautiful portrait of a beautiful bird.

Leonard

Leonard Daranjo

"When the waiting stops, the living begins"

thanks for the comment. glad i could write a haiku about your favorite bird. in one of your favorite writing form.
glad the portrait came out so beautifully. i worked hard on making it stand out

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I like your Haiku. Too often, I start writing one and next thing I know its a 6 stanza poem lol................stan

i can appreciate that because when i first start writing haiku i use to so the same. glad you like it

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