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Haiku about Owls 5/7/5
Stalker in the night
Prowling from swaying treetops
Owl catches her prey
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
CCfire
Sat, 2011-07-02 23:30
Haiku is the only form I
Haiku is the only form I actually enjoy doing, and this one which strictly I think is a senryu as haiku does not deal with subjects only nature intended..either way it paints the picture.
Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2011-07-03 07:28
Thanks Chez
i appreciate you commenting
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Barbara Writes
Sun, 2011-07-03 21:16
Chez
I agree it is a senyru
But I wrote it for another poetry site that suggested this title for poetry writing thanks again
I wanted to share it here also
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raj
Sun, 2011-07-03 06:27
Barbara
i am a haiku fan and i loved this one...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2011-07-03 07:29
Raj
thanks I am glad you like
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Leonard
Thu, 2011-07-07 22:12
Barbara
Wow - one of my favourite forms on one of my favourite birds. A beautiful portrait of a beautiful bird.
Leonard
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-07-08 10:01
Leonard
thanks for the comment. glad i could write a haiku about your favorite bird. in one of your favorite writing form.
glad the portrait came out so beautifully. i worked hard on making it stand out
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scribbler
Thu, 2011-07-07 23:19
hi
I like your Haiku. Too often, I start writing one and next thing I know its a 6 stanza poem lol................stan
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-07-08 10:03
hi Stan
i can appreciate that because when i first start writing haiku i use to so the same. glad you like it
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