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destiny
Member since July 21, 2022
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Smile...
The screams you hear through closed doors
is all you know.
The silent struggles you face alone are
all you can hold on to.
You'll be fine, everything is alright, don't worry
is what you hear.
Smile...
The countless sleepless nights, as glass breaks
and doors slam.
Endless tears are hidden beneath your pillow, it holds
all your agony, with covers over your head.
Smile...
Pain racing through your body, blood runs
slowly.
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Dirty looks to silence your cries, threats
to silence your fears.
Smile...
You face the world, no one sees the horror
you hide so well.
You look down, you hear the same thing
Smile.
destiny’s timeline
- July 2023
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21 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2022
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21 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- May 2010
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29 SatReceived a critique
on Smile... from @Hooded Stranger
"destiny, this is the second poem of a silent struggle I have read tonight. I must say, yours captured the moment extremely well. I felt the anguish deep inside, hidden from view and disguised in that smile (great title…" -
29 Sat
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16 SunCritiqued
"What you say" by @Sinthya
"I like this and I have heard people say these things in wonderment as they question the words said to them . I like it." -
16 SunReceived a critique
on Staring Into THe Sun from @magics02
"Very nice write here Destiny Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived" -
16 Sun
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16 Sun
- April 2010
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19 MonReceived a critique
on Turn from @DawningDaytripper
"Hi Destiny, I recommend extending your ending. The switch seems abrupt, not as natural as it could end. Ya know what I mean? I hope so. Good write, thanks for sharing. Julie D.D." -
19 Mon
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10 SatReceived a critique
on Self-fulfilling Prophecy from @DawningDaytripper
"I liked it, and it can be interputed as true. Good write Destiny. I do recommend losing your ".'s" at the end of most of your lines when using the bold, we get the sentance structure, so it ends up destracting from the…" -
10 SatReceived a critique
on Self-fulfilling Prophecy from @Lenny of Cohen
"a powerful write my friend. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny" -
09 FriReceived a critique
on Self-fulfilling Prophecy from @Alice Ember
"I don't know what to say i just love it. Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul." -
09 Fri
- January 2010
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17 SunReceived a critique
on Racing Through My Veins from @broken_skye
"This is format. You should learn how to write your poems like this it is a good way I have learned. Now it is your turn." -
07 ThuCritiqued
"Feelings Inside" by @JamieLehmann
"intresting i like what your trying to get across try using just a little less unimportant words maybe try and make it flow more easily" -
05 Tue
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04 Mon
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03 Sun
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03 SunCritiqued
"to love you EXCLAMATION" by @kowque
"i like this poem a lot i feel like it releases the parts of my mind that are closed until they are touched by only good words and true meaning ii like it" -
02 Sat
- December 2009
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30 WedCritiqued
"Haikookas" by @weirdelf
"this really opened my eyes to new possibilities in my writing the way you write makes me think" -
30 WedFirst critique offered
on "Haikookas" by @weirdelf
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29 TueFirst publication
Racing Through My Veins
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29 Tue
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i’m 16
Location: Maryland, USA
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